02-07-2016, 09:42 AM
Hi Zachary. I like this poem but I think you are trying to portray Satan being a inevitable in our average daily life. I think you should let the poem flow together to portray how Satan is not just 'here' but is actually doing something or if he is or is not. Is Satan strong enough or not?
"He'll come over no announce.
Show himself into the house.
Sit beside you on the couch.
Keeping tabs on your spouse."
Satan may be amogst us but what is his impact and significance to us?
"He'll come over no announce.
Show himself into the house.
Sit beside you on the couch.
Keeping tabs on your spouse."
Satan may be amogst us but what is his impact and significance to us?