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Pensive Glance

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01-31-2016, 12:11 AM

Nice job on the edit! a few typos: forever and a double see in the couplet.

I love the tone of the couplet although I think it would improve if you got rid of one "now". Good work. Big Grin

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Pensive Glance - by Julius - 01-28-2016, 11:44 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by LukeSizemore - 01-28-2016, 11:54 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by ellajam - 01-29-2016, 03:03 AM

RE: Pensive Glance - by Keith - 01-29-2016, 07:36 AM

RE: Pensive Glance - by RiverNotch - 01-29-2016, 03:14 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by Julius - 01-29-2016, 09:04 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by ellajam - 01-29-2016, 09:16 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by Julius - 01-29-2016, 09:46 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by ellajam - 01-29-2016, 10:03 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by Julius - 01-30-2016, 01:01 AM

RE: Pensive Glance - by Julius - 01-30-2016, 11:29 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by ellajam - 01-31-2016, 12:11 AM

RE: Pensive Glance - by Jeremiahcp - 01-31-2016, 01:57 AM

RE: Pensive Glance - by RiverNotch - 01-31-2016, 03:18 AM

RE: Pensive Glance - by Julius - 01-31-2016, 07:12 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by billy - 01-31-2016, 08:02 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by Julius - 01-31-2016, 10:56 PM

RE: Pensive Glance - by ellajam - 01-31-2016, 11:20 PM

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