01-30-2016, 11:29 PM
Thank you all for reading and the advice given to me. I have used most of it in my edit and provided a stronger volta in the final couplet. I am a bit doubtful about that last couplet 
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RE: Pensive Glance - by Julius - 01-30-2016, 11:29 PM
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