Morning Mood 2.1
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RN,

I'm not going to critique the second one, but I wanted to say the cohesion is much better.

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How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Morning Mood 2.1 - by RiverNotch - 01-26-2016, 09:50 PM
RE: Morning Mood - by Erthona - 01-27-2016, 12:07 AM
RE: Morning Mood - by RiverNotch - 01-28-2016, 02:57 PM
RE: Morning Mood 2.0: Erthona - by Erthona - 01-30-2016, 02:42 AM
RE: Morning Mood 2.0: Erthona - by RiverNotch - 02-11-2016, 03:51 PM
RE: Morning Mood 2.1 - by Achebe - 03-07-2016, 08:27 AM
RE: Morning Mood 2.1 - by Mattp - 03-16-2016, 07:02 AM
RE: Morning Mood 2.1 - by RiverNotch - 03-24-2016, 03:21 PM
RE: Morning Mood 2.1 - by Lucifer - 04-07-2016, 07:47 AM



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