Tiger
#8
Thank you all for your critique - the edit is really a completely new haiku where I have tried to utilise the advice given


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Tiger - by Julius - 01-23-2016, 10:39 PM
RE: Tiger - by UselessBlueprint - 01-24-2016, 12:45 AM
RE: Tiger - by Julius - 01-24-2016, 06:08 AM
RE: Tiger - by Tiger the Lion - 01-24-2016, 07:07 AM
RE: Tiger - by Erthona - 01-24-2016, 08:24 AM
RE: Tiger - by Julius - 01-27-2016, 01:11 AM
RE: Tiger - by Tiger the Lion - 01-27-2016, 01:44 AM
RE: Tiger - by Julius - 01-28-2016, 12:00 AM



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