Everyday you stalk me

[LukeSizemore]

I actually prefer the original if you can make the last line rhyme in some way. And also revise to say "That THE man in the mirror..."


quote='Jeremiahcp' pid='203291' dateline='1452969516']

This is a work in progress, and I would love to hear all feedback on it. 

2nd Revision

Everyday you stalk
and with goofy faces
you like to mock
I beg you to reason
but you imitate me again
and my only revenge
is to tell all my friends
the man in the mirror
is a real jerk

Revised


Everyday you stalk me
and with goofy faces
you like to mock me.
I try to reason to no end,
as you imitate me again
and my only revenge
is to tell all my friends
the man in the mirror
is a real jerk.

Original

Everyday you stalk me
and with goofy faces
you like to mock me.
I try to reason to no end,
as all you do is imitate me again
and my only revenge 
is to tell all my friends
that man in the mirror
is a real asshole.
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