01-24-2016, 12:45 AM
Normally I would be bothered by word choice in a piece like this, but it doesn't bother me all too much here. I am, however, confused by the second person. The poem itself also reads completely unnaturally. It's easy enough to read it imperatively, but that makes it sound like a small fragment of a thought.
My question is the title. I don't understand it.
(P.S. didn't realize it was posted under haiku until after I replied. woops.)
My question is the title. I don't understand it.
(P.S. didn't realize it was posted under haiku until after I replied. woops.)
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona