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01-23-2016, 10:39 PM

Tiger (Not really an edit - really a new version taking critique into account)

yellowing grass sways
undisturbed antelope rests...
unlike the tiger

Tiger

Enjoy cooling flesh
and the airborne smell of death
In your innocence

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Tiger - by Julius - 01-23-2016, 10:39 PM

RE: Tiger - by UselessBlueprint - 01-24-2016, 12:45 AM

RE: Tiger - by Julius - 01-24-2016, 06:08 AM

RE: Tiger - by Tiger the Lion - 01-24-2016, 07:07 AM

RE: Tiger - by Erthona - 01-24-2016, 08:24 AM

RE: Tiger - by Julius - 01-27-2016, 01:11 AM

RE: Tiger - by Tiger the Lion - 01-27-2016, 01:44 AM

RE: Tiger - by Julius - 01-28-2016, 12:00 AM

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