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01-21-2016, 06:34 PM

(01-21-2016, 03:01 PM)Akira Wrote: Screw the Haiku Journal; rename it "terminal velocity" and sell it to a skydiving magazine.

;-)

Skydiving magazine... of course!
Maybe, just for them, I'd change that second line:

a slit of sun
our shadows seem so small
the weight of nothingness
and yet we fall

all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?

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< whispered in an ear > - by rayheinrich - 01-02-2016, 10:10 AM

RE: < whispered in an ear > - by milo - 01-02-2016, 11:03 AM

RE: < whispered in an ear > - by Emz - 01-02-2016, 11:18 AM

RE: < whispered in an ear > - by rayheinrich - 01-02-2016, 11:45 AM

RE: < whispered in an ear > - by sharon rhutasel - 01-19-2016, 05:17 AM

RE: < whispered in an ear > - by rayheinrich - 01-19-2016, 09:10 AM

RE: < whispered in an ear > - by just mercedes - 01-19-2016, 06:06 AM

RE: < whispered in an ear > - by Akira - 01-21-2016, 03:01 PM

RE: < whispered in an ear > - by rayheinrich - 01-21-2016, 06:34 PM

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