01-21-2016, 06:34 PM
(01-21-2016, 03:01 PM)Akira Wrote: Screw the Haiku Journal; rename it "terminal velocity" and sell it to a skydiving magazine.
;-)
Skydiving magazine... of course!
Maybe, just for them, I'd change that second line:
a slit of sun
our shadows seem so small
the weight of nothingness
and yet we fall
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions