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First Poem: Abyss of the Mind
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01-21-2016, 05:14 PM
(01-21-2016, 04:46 PM)just mercedes Wrote: Welcome mc - a very abstract poem. Not at all my cup of tea. The only poetic device in it seems to be the end line rhyme. Otherwise it's a prose statement with a line break.Thanks jm for the feedback. I was attempting a Prose Poem. Maybe I should remove the rhyme line and replace with a standard prose line. |
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First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by mcauburn - 01-21-2016, 04:36 PM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by just mercedes - 01-21-2016, 04:46 PM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by mcauburn - 01-21-2016, 05:14 PM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by just mercedes - 01-21-2016, 05:35 PM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by mcauburn - 01-22-2016, 02:10 AM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by Erthona - 01-22-2016, 03:41 AM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by rowens - 01-22-2016, 04:18 AM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by UselessBlueprint - 01-23-2016, 03:55 AM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by the french these days - 01-23-2016, 05:47 PM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by Jeremiahcp - 01-24-2016, 02:36 AM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by Icon Zero - 01-27-2016, 03:53 PM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by billy - 01-27-2016, 04:56 PM
RE: First Poem: Abyss of the Mind - by blanc - 01-28-2016, 04:29 AM
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