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The Dandelion
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01-21-2016, 03:37 AM
I like the theme of the poem, but came away with a muddled picture. Maybe dwell on the ugliness, not the beauty of the dandelion. After all, unlike the narcissus, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
I'll revisit your post to see your future edits to the poem. Thanks for posting your first poem. |
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The Dandelion - by mv5543 - 01-20-2016, 12:12 PM
RE: The Dandelion - by rhoiyt - 01-20-2016, 04:19 PM
RE: The Dandelion - by Julius - 01-20-2016, 09:50 PM
RE: The Dandelion - by mcauburn - 01-21-2016, 03:37 AM
RE: The Dandelion - by mv5543 - 01-21-2016, 04:55 AM
RE: The Dandelion - by rhoiyt - 01-22-2016, 08:05 AM
RE: The Dandelion - by Bunx - 01-23-2016, 03:11 AM
RE: The Dandelion - by Jeremiahcp - 01-25-2016, 03:30 AM
RE: The Dandelion - by Brujo - 01-25-2016, 04:13 AM
RE: The Dandelion - by BW BRINE - 01-26-2016, 05:18 AM
RE: The Dandelion - by LukeSizemore - 01-27-2016, 12:45 PM
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