The Dandelion

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Hi Everyone! This is the first poem I have posted, and I would love to get some feedback. 


To the Narcissus I don’t compare,

But dare I say, there still is beauty in my golden shades.

I’m here for just a few days,

Only to wither away, leaving some kindred in my short wake.

But you come at me with a battalion of spades,

What have I done to earn your rage?

Edit 1:

To the Narcissus I don’t compare,

But dare I say, there still is beauty in my golden shades.

I’m here for just a few days, 

Only to wither away, leaving some kindred in my short wake.

But you come at me with your spade and rage,

What have I done to earn your hate?

Edit 2:

To the Narcissus I don’t compare,

But dare I say, there still is beauty in my golden shades.

I’m here for just a few days, 

Only to wither away, leaving some kindred in my short wake.

But still you consider me a bane,

What have I done to earn your hate?