No Reason At All

[ClaytonDaury]

Thank you Billy. I have updated the poem and your tips have improved the flow greatly. I was hoping to reference the title to Alice in Wonderland because like the poem, the movie also is nonsensical, and some may not get the reference. But the title currently being used does fit. This is my first piece so I still have lots of time to learn!

the title fits the poem well enough.

the poem has a nonsensical quality to it. i think you could use some better wordchoice in places.  ie: distress instead of uneasy stress.
you could also remove unnecessary words:
The same reason why
the judgement of others,
can cause you uneasy stress.

The same reason
judgement of others,
can cause you distress.

try and use brevity, if needed you can always flesh it out after the first few drafts.

Hello, I am very new to poetry, haven written this for an English class project (grade 12), but I was told by many to actually share it so here it is! Feel free to tell me what to fix so I can perfect it! I also can't decide on a title yet, I'm thinking between "No Reason At All" and some reference to Alice and Wonderland!  

Have you any idea,
why a raven is like a writing desk? if you use lines of poetry from elsewhere attribute them to the poet; at the bottom of the poem but seprate from it sya something along the lines of "why is a raven like a writing desk" from Lewis Carroll's Alice's adventures in wonderland
Or why a pillow should wear a bullet-proof vest? i like the line i'm hoping for a good pay off

If you know why, then I bet you can guess: should that be [if you don't know why?]
it's the same reason you buy something for more,
when you can have it for less.

The same reason why
the judgement of others,
can cause you uneasy stress. i like the alliteration of the [C]s

And also why
the simplest mistakes
can fabricate a mess.

If you happen to know the reason, 
You are truly blessed!
But for those who don't?

Well,
I digress.