remove everything thats excess.
(01-17-2016, 03:38 AM)Jeremiahcp Wrote:This is a work in progress, and I would love to hear all feedback on it.
Revised
Everyday you stalk me
and with goofy faces
you like to mock me.
I try to reason to no end,
as you imitate me again
and my only revenge
is to tell all my friends
the man in the mirror this and the next line are cliche
is a real jerk.
Original
Everyday you stalk me
and with goofy faces
you like to mock me.
I try to reason to no end,
as all you do is imitate me again
and my only revenge
is to tell all my friends
that man in the mirror
is a real asshole.