01-17-2016, 08:55 PM
end, again, friends all slant rhymed for me.
The whole poem had a clear cadence for me until the last line, which ended with an unenjoyable thud. If that was your goal it worked, but it made me just walk away.
The whole poem had a clear cadence for me until the last line, which ended with an unenjoyable thud. If that was your goal it worked, but it made me just walk away.
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