Everyday you stalk me
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(01-17-2016, 12:02 PM)Jeremiahcp Wrote:  I didn't even notice the similarities between end and friends. Thanks for pointing that out. =) However, I think if you read the poem out loud it works out, as end and friends is not really a rhyme. It would be a rhyme if it was friend instead of friends, but there are some similar sounds and visual repetition there. I'll think about the ending a bit more. Thanks for the input.
Not a perfect rhyme, but a strong slant rhyme. My apologies if I was unclear.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Everyday you stalk me - by Jeremiahcp - 01-17-2016, 03:38 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by Achebe - 01-17-2016, 09:23 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by Jeremiahcp - 01-17-2016, 12:02 PM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by Achebe - 01-17-2016, 03:32 PM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by ellajam - 01-17-2016, 08:55 PM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by Jeremiahcp - 01-18-2016, 02:38 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by ellajam - 01-18-2016, 02:47 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by UselessBlueprint - 01-18-2016, 04:22 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by Jeremiahcp - 01-18-2016, 04:45 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by billy - 01-18-2016, 10:27 PM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by mv5543 - 01-19-2016, 08:36 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by ClaytonDaury - 01-19-2016, 01:15 PM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by Jeremiahcp - 01-24-2016, 02:57 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by Erthona - 01-24-2016, 11:10 PM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by Jeremiahcp - 01-25-2016, 01:51 AM
RE: Everyday you stalk me - by LukeSizemore - 01-27-2016, 12:17 PM



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