01-14-2016, 09:34 AM
(01-10-2016, 01:22 PM)mlund Wrote: moonlight streams through my windowWhat you have here is a taste of what could be personification with the moon watching too. I think it would be interesting if added to that and gave the moon some sensuality and personality. With all these people gazing at him the moon could be quite promiscuous and lusty over his power lol.
how many years i've lied here and watched
thinking about anything else
now i wonder what it thinks of me
does it watch me through the window too?
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