01-10-2016, 07:54 AM
MAE27,
Ah yes, I've tried such experiments before, as here most of mine didn't usually work, but I salute you for the attempt. If you are looking to salvage this try starting the poem off by not giving the appearance of meter. You also might want to look into concrete poetry, so as to give a visual impression along with the words.
Best,
Dale
Ah yes, I've tried such experiments before, as here most of mine didn't usually work, but I salute you for the attempt. If you are looking to salvage this try starting the poem off by not giving the appearance of meter. You also might want to look into concrete poetry, so as to give a visual impression along with the words.
Best,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.