"When a light goes out" a short Poem
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Hi, Jeremiah, this is lovely.

First, it would be great if you could give your poems at least a working title. It gets confusing when the list of threads has multiple untitleds,  makes it difficult to find a poem you want to reread. Aside from that titles can be a wonderful tool, you might want to give them some thought.

I found L2 awkward at first but it's growing on me. Smile
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RE: Untitled Short Poem - by ellajam - 01-10-2016, 07:50 AM



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