January (Haiku)

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January (Haiku)

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01-10-2016, 07:39 AM

(01-10-2016, 05:55 AM)dukealien Wrote: January (Haiku)

Willow boughs bow-bent
Arc tear-drenched embroidered sleeves
To frozen river.

(Or should I ask, "Haiku?")

I'm more a fan of minimalism - this is how I'd use that shot of time and place -

willows, bowed
by lace sleeves ~
frozen river

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January (Haiku) - by dukealien - 01-10-2016, 05:55 AM

RE: January (Haiku) - by billy - 01-10-2016, 07:25 AM

RE: January (Haiku) - by just mercedes - 01-10-2016, 07:39 AM

RE: January (Haiku) - by Jeremiahcp - 01-11-2016, 12:00 AM

RE: January (Haiku) - by dukealien - 01-11-2016, 07:54 AM

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