Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used)

[Beat Eater]

Thanks Mike,

I'll definitely be searching more my own voice as I continue. Sometimes I feel it's hard to hear my own voice in my head because it's drowned out by all the voices of musicians, rappers, writers, etc. that I love. I tend to gravitate a style of someone else that's similar to the style I'm writing.

I appreciate the encouragement. I wasn't even really thinking about using my own language and slang to write. More just what seemed "correct".