Karma in HD

[Emz]

Karma in HD

cocked elastic band
snaps backward—
Thwap!

I really like this; I feel like it can be interpreted in may ways. I think Thwap! works really well for the last line, and it is a nice word as Ellajam pointed out.

I don't know if I would change anything here. The only thing I considered to comment on was the capital letter T in Thwap (as in, making it lower case to remain consistent with the rest), but my guess is that it requires the capital letter for the sound effect. Would it work the same without the capital T?