Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used)
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Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used)
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01-09-2016, 05:12 PM
Thanks Leanne. You're spot on about that last line. I also thought it ended after "Myabe me." but I wasn't sure the "no father figure message was pushed through enough. Definitely agree that it should be removed.
I'm glad you like that part. It was fun to write.  Thanks for your input that gives me a good idea for an edit. |
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Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used) - by Beat Eater - 01-09-2016, 04:16 PM
RE: Would it be any different? (Strong language used) - by Leanne - 01-09-2016, 04:32 PM
RE: Would it be any different? (Strong language used) - by Beat Eater - 01-09-2016, 05:12 PM
RE: Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used) - by Weeded - 01-09-2016, 09:55 PM
RE: Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used) - by Beat Eater - 01-10-2016, 05:44 AM
RE: Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used) - by Weeded - 01-10-2016, 07:05 AM
RE: Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used) - by Leanne - 01-10-2016, 06:06 AM
RE: Would it make a difference? [1st Edit] (Strong language used) - by Beat Eater - 01-11-2016, 10:32 AM
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