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NickyDubs
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01-09-2016, 07:11 AM

I think it's a good building block to a larger story. It gets a little confusing at the end. Is it God or the Ego? I think I know where you are going with it but be bold, Go for it. That's all that poetry is. Good Luck, great start.

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RE: Untitled - by NickyDubs - 01-09-2016, 07:11 AM

RE: Untitled - by Beat Eater - 01-09-2016, 07:41 AM

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RE: Untitled - by UselessBlueprint - 01-16-2016, 01:53 PM

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RE: Untitled - by Jeremiahcp - 01-17-2016, 02:48 AM

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