Palmer Park
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Another beautiful piece Mcfair.

Time spent making good memories beats out all other riches.

Not sure you need "hard" in the first sentence as it reads clearly and beautifully in:

Take turns tossing overhand arches
of bread gone hard and good for aiming
to feed the smaller ducks and little birds.


Thanks for sharing it.
TB
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Palmer Park - by Mcfair - 01-06-2016, 12:04 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by Achebe - 01-06-2016, 12:19 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by Mcfair - 01-07-2016, 08:51 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by MAE27 - 01-08-2016, 01:25 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by mcauburn - 01-08-2016, 07:09 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by roggi - 01-08-2016, 07:27 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by browtm7 - 01-09-2016, 02:57 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by Beat Eater - 01-09-2016, 08:16 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by The anti-anthropocentrist - 01-09-2016, 12:02 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by UselessBlueprint - 01-10-2016, 02:28 PM



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