01-08-2016, 07:39 PM
It reminds me of Freezetag an old song from lifetimes ago. There's a lot unsaid, which for me is the fun of a good poem, it leaves room for the reader to imagine a scene. I could envisage both happy and unhappy conclusions.
Well done, exiting,dance like beginning drew me in.
Well done, exiting,dance like beginning drew me in.
