Palmer Park
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A snapshot of social commentary, I like the theme and observations of wealth and impoverishment.  Nicely put together, but not sure if it's too brief, maybe it could engage more with description of the protagonists. I'm keen to see more.
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Palmer Park - by Mcfair - 01-06-2016, 12:04 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by Achebe - 01-06-2016, 12:19 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by Mcfair - 01-07-2016, 08:51 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by MAE27 - 01-08-2016, 01:25 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by mcauburn - 01-08-2016, 07:09 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by roggi - 01-08-2016, 07:27 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by browtm7 - 01-09-2016, 02:57 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by Beat Eater - 01-09-2016, 08:16 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by The anti-anthropocentrist - 01-09-2016, 12:02 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by UselessBlueprint - 01-10-2016, 02:28 PM



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