01-08-2016, 07:16 PM
Read and liked, dangerous, powerful stuff.
I'm too new at this to offer a technical critique, but as a novice it had a dark pulse and a graveyard feel. Keep at it!
Try to be specific, there is really nothing here to help the poet improve his poem. If you liked it, but specific about that, if not, be specific about that. Please read the material about critiquing poetry that you were given when joining the site.
Thanks you - Mod
I'm too new at this to offer a technical critique, but as a novice it had a dark pulse and a graveyard feel. Keep at it!
Try to be specific, there is really nothing here to help the poet improve his poem. If you liked it, but specific about that, if not, be specific about that. Please read the material about critiquing poetry that you were given when joining the site.
Thanks you - Mod