Palmer Park
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I really enjoyed the visuals you painted with your poem. "Five long blocks of countless cracks..." That brings back great memories of walking on the sidewalk and jumping over the cracks, so I wouldn't break my mother's back Smile. Love the sharing, on the bench" moment as well. Who hasn't spent a special moment sharing a goodie with grandpa on a bench, chair etc... Thanks for sharing.
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Palmer Park - by Mcfair - 01-06-2016, 12:04 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by Achebe - 01-06-2016, 12:19 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by Mcfair - 01-07-2016, 08:51 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by MAE27 - 01-08-2016, 01:25 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by mcauburn - 01-08-2016, 07:09 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by roggi - 01-08-2016, 07:27 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by browtm7 - 01-09-2016, 02:57 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by Beat Eater - 01-09-2016, 08:16 AM
RE: Palmer Park - by The anti-anthropocentrist - 01-09-2016, 12:02 PM
RE: Palmer Park - by UselessBlueprint - 01-10-2016, 02:28 PM



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