A poem for Twelfth Night
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Very clear.

I get the 'usage' of the tree. It is very easy to understand and apply this idea of usage to other components of life. However the title of 'Sad tree' may be a little too clear, I believe that there is room for development. This tree to me is not just a sad tree, but one of many sad trees.

"In a pile of sad trees." What caused the tree to be sad? Was it sad from the beginning or was it that it only took 3 glasses of wine for Wayno's (some random character I just made up) mother in law to snarl at him causing a family fracas? Is it by design that this tree and trees before it are this way, or is it the product of some repetitive process?
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A poem for Twelfth Night - by MAE27 - 01-07-2016, 07:45 AM
RE: A poem for Twelfth Night - by The anti-anthropocentrist - 01-07-2016, 01:46 PM
RE: A poem for Twelfth Night - by Achebe - 01-07-2016, 04:56 PM
RE: A poem for Twelfth Night - by MAE27 - 01-08-2016, 01:12 AM
RE: A poem for Twelfth Night - by Achebe - 01-09-2016, 08:30 AM
RE: A poem for Twelfth Night - by browtm7 - 01-09-2016, 04:15 AM
RE: A poem for Twelfth Night - by Erthona - 01-09-2016, 12:36 PM
RE: A poem for Twelfth Night - by MAE27 - 01-09-2016, 09:27 PM
RE: A poem for Twelfth Night - by Erthona - 01-10-2016, 07:54 AM



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