Hanged Bottle [Edit 1]
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"Question: Is the final couplet/stanza needed? I left it, for now, but only because I hate leaving the reader to think the preceding stanza was to be taken seriously."

Probably not unless you are trying to be imitative of the Romantic poets (Coleridge, Wordsworth, Shelly, et., al.). Of course they would have been more lyrical. Smile

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Hanged Bottle [Edit 1] - by dukealien - 01-05-2016, 07:22 AM
RE: Hanging Bottle - by Achebe - 01-05-2016, 07:40 AM
RE: Hanging Bottle - by Weeded - 01-05-2016, 08:55 AM
RE: Hanging Bottle - by Emz - 01-05-2016, 06:50 PM
RE: Hanging Bottle - by dukealien - 01-05-2016, 11:21 PM
RE: Hanging Bottle - by Erthona - 01-06-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: Hanging Bottle - by will - 01-06-2016, 04:48 AM
RE: Hanged Bottle [Edit 1] - by dukealien - 01-07-2016, 12:43 AM
RE: Hanged Bottle [Edit 1] - by Erthona - 01-07-2016, 06:12 AM



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