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Another New Year’s
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01-06-2016, 12:40 PM
I really love the first three stanzas. I think you did a wonderful job starting with something exciting. You really catch my attention there. In the fourth stanza instead of saying "Preparing to span that ice" I think you could say " Preparing to span the ice. That way I think it reads and sounds better.
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Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-06-2016, 11:13 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by emyleerose - 01-06-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-07-2016, 07:46 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by UselessBlueprint - 01-07-2016, 02:14 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-09-2016, 12:45 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by roggi - 01-08-2016, 07:39 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by Julius - 01-12-2016, 04:55 AM
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