01-06-2016, 09:32 AM
Brow,
thanks for the feedback. I actually tried to keep it as general as possible in this one just to see if any part at all would spark interest. The fourth stanza is definitely the most powerful of the six but I was always told not end two lines on the same word... I guess i'll find out if thats ok or not too
thanks again,
mike
thanks for the feedback. I actually tried to keep it as general as possible in this one just to see if any part at all would spark interest. The fourth stanza is definitely the most powerful of the six but I was always told not end two lines on the same word... I guess i'll find out if thats ok or not too
thanks again,mike
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