01-04-2016, 05:33 AM
I think you have tapped into the anger that fuels some political candidates whose supporters have lost many of the things they always believed would be theirs for life. While he acquiesces initially, in the end he returns to a violent action and a statement of dominance. Is he hopeful the slide will stop if he just asserts himself? Does his anger end here? Has the world passed him by relegating him to a caricature of Archie Bunker. I can see him in his overstuffed recliner nonplused at the world playing out in front of him on the TV. Thanks for capturing the angst. Were you trying to develop a rhyme pattern? Right now three verses have one pattern, one has another and two have none. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck.