Haiku (maybe)
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(01-01-2016, 01:59 PM)billy Wrote:  yes, but did he get it right?

personally i'd go with senryu as i can't see a seasonal word.

i do like the last line; it has shit in it.

Of course it's senryu,  I just wanted to nip the associated haiku ignorance in the kigo.
But yeah, no fucking body reads anything anymore so I really don't know why I fucking bother.

And yes, shit, there's nothing more descriptive of nature than shit.
Or, to quote the bard:

        "If it ain't shit, it ain't natural."
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Messages In This Thread
Haiku (maybe) - by Pyrra - 12-31-2015, 10:57 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Emz - 12-31-2015, 11:49 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Erthona - 01-01-2016, 12:15 AM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Pyrra - 01-01-2016, 12:46 AM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-01-2016, 06:21 AM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by billy - 01-01-2016, 01:59 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-01-2016, 02:26 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Erthona - 01-02-2016, 10:57 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-02-2016, 11:18 PM



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