Haiku (maybe)

Haiku (maybe)

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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01-01-2016, 01:59 PM

yes, but did he get it right?

personally i'd go with senryu as i can't see a seasonal word.

i do like the last line; it has shit in it.

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Haiku (maybe) - by Pyrra - 12-31-2015, 10:57 PM

RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Emz - 12-31-2015, 11:49 PM

RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Erthona - 01-01-2016, 12:15 AM

RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Pyrra - 01-01-2016, 12:46 AM

RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-01-2016, 06:21 AM

RE: Haiku (maybe) - by billy - 01-01-2016, 01:59 PM

RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-01-2016, 02:26 PM

RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Erthona - 01-02-2016, 10:57 PM

RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-02-2016, 11:18 PM

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