Haiku (maybe)
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I  just wanted to state, for the record, that haiku are primarily about
human interaction with nature.

They are NOT about nature per se, but about humans observing nature.

And as such, they often contain many of the same subjects as  senryu which
haiku portray using nature as a metaphor.

It has often been noted that by not requiring a turn (cutting point, word, line),
senryu, in general, are not as effective as haiku in portraying the life we experience.
(But this point is often rendered moot; as many senryu do include a turn.)

By way of example:

Nine Haiku by Issa (One of the four great masters of haiku, the others being Basho, Buson, and Shiki.)
These were translated By Robert Hass (Who is, hands-down, the best translator of Japanese haiku.)
Don’t worry, spiders,
I keep house
  casually.


  New Year’s Day—
everything is in blossom!
  I feel about average.


  The snow is melting
and the village is flooded
  with children.


  Goes out,  
comes back—
  the love life of a cat.


  Mosquito at my ear—
does he think  
  I’m deaf?  


  Under the evening moon
the snail
  is stripped to the waist.


  Even with insects—
some can sing,
 some can’t.  


  All the time I pray to Buddha
I keep on
 killing mosquitoes.


  Napped half the day;
no one  
  punished me!
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Messages In This Thread
Haiku (maybe) - by Pyrra - 12-31-2015, 10:57 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Emz - 12-31-2015, 11:49 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Erthona - 01-01-2016, 12:15 AM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Pyrra - 01-01-2016, 12:46 AM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-01-2016, 06:21 AM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by billy - 01-01-2016, 01:59 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-01-2016, 02:26 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by Erthona - 01-02-2016, 10:57 PM
RE: Haiku (maybe) - by rayheinrich - 01-02-2016, 11:18 PM



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