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(12-31-2015, 12:55 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
        A master of haiku, profound;
        Needed only two verbs and a noun.
        When asked how it's done,
        He wrote fifty-one;
        at speeds that were faster than sound.

Hi there rayheinrich,

My serious thoughts, not trolling this timeSmile 

I really enjoyed this limerick. My only complaint would be with the forth line; I'm not entirely sure if the fifty-one refers to fifty-one haiku poems, or fifty-one verbs and nouns. Or maybe he literally wrote "fifty-one" and that's the meaning of haiku much like "42" is the meaning of life? Or maybe it's intentionally ambiguous because we're not allowed to understand the master of haiku; it would be like revealing a magician's trick?

My other theory is that he literally wrote "fifty-one" and somehow it's two verbs and a noun, but I can't seem to make that theory work. lmao

Emma
These fragments I have shored against my ruins
Why then Ile fit you
-T.S. Eliot (The Wasteland)

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< turning into > - by rayheinrich - 12-31-2015, 12:55 PM
RE: < turning into > - by Emz - 12-31-2015, 06:08 PM
RE: < turning into > - by rayheinrich - 12-31-2015, 08:25 PM



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