< Fowl Whether >

[Emz]

        A randy young chap name of Powell, (very descriptive; however Powell is such a respectable surname for someone young and randy)
        Once mounted a frisky young fowl. ("frisky" implies that the fowl was consenting or willing, so at least Powell had that going for him)
        As he thrust in his pickle, (no size descriptor? :p )
        Her feathers did tickle; (okay so now we know the fowl is female)
        He laughed 'til he splitted his bowel. (is splitted even a word?) 

Emma

What curious points you bring up. As these seem to reflect effort on your part,
I shall take it upon myself to reflect well and hard on your suggestions and try my
best not to misconstrue them any further. It's good to find someone with the courage
to express themselves, even at the risk of being thought inept and ill-prepared.
Your attempts are sincerely appreciated.  I'm leaving on a trip to the Aucklands
tomorrow, but I certainly intend to mull them upon my return.
Ray

I didn't mean anything by it--I was just responding to the fact that NobodyNothing was joking about doing a line-by-line. Usually when I find a new community I try my best to adapt quickly and fit in. (I'm very nostalgic for the old poetry forum I used to hang out at, which is no longer there   )

I wouldn't have tried this sort of thing if a) you weren't a regular and b) I didn't assume you were good with humor. After scanning around a few of the posts I figured most of the regulars here would be alright with that sort of thing. Please don't misconstrue anything I say as negative. I got concerned when I saw your recent limerick (but then again I have a habit of thinking everything is about me which I know isn't always the case).

I meant it when I said that I loved this limerick, and the line-by-line was nothing more than a joke.

Emma