12-29-2015, 11:20 AM
Do you want a line by line critique of this, or just an overall aesthetic assessment of it?
In either case, I'm unqualified.
Lickety-split, it's a limerick!
In either case, I'm unqualified.
Lickety-split, it's a limerick!
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."