Stark Contrast (was Stark) rev #4.

[QDeathstar]

you should also put the edit at the top.

[Okay, here is revision #2.  I plan to add back the spring at the end eventually]

The air is still, silent, rising, still, yes, silent, ok, rising, awkward and opposite
heated by the afternoon sun directed
so it yields no shadow.  Parking the air is directed by the afternoon shadow so it yields no shadow? I interpret this to mean it's suny, but that is a lot of work
lot extends starkly beyond grammatical error here, parking lots or a parking lot

A sad boy who sits, neck bent,  drops of sweat the flow and sound of this lone are nice, perhaps drops of swear could use improvement
impotent against the heatnot a fan of impotent here
fall near the dead dried hollow stick
of a worm stuck by its dessicated mucous. the sounds here aren't worth the wordiness

Rare wind slides sand and toasted
pine needles in the empty black paved lot;  
bright sun lights everything to an afterimage of itself,
bleached yet glowing. and

He knows he has forever lost or forgotten
some innate essential piece of being.
Sounds ceases, wind dies
Nothing happens.