NaPM April 16 2015

[Keith]

^^^pretty heroic,  , a fun read with a tragic undertone.

Thanks ella there's so much you could do.........if only

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Cool, loved it.
But this line:
"I have just overheard two men discussing."

For verisimilitude, not that it couldn't have been two of the three,
you should make it three; or, alternately, one man talking to himself.
(The latter, by the way, supports two of my four theories.)

I had to google verisimilitude and yes you are correct, I went with three. thanks Ray