NaPM April 17 2015
#20
(12-04-2015, 02:30 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
(12-04-2015, 07:18 AM)Keith Wrote:  Cold Snap

I'm not sure it knows,
it only thinks itself
pretty, polishing lakes
with its still breath
a pale complexion
reflects,
flurried by the laughter
left behind
as it drifts over,
filling fields with silence
deep enough to drop
small birds in colour.

Now, damn! I enjoyed the other ones, but this contains the simplicity of true beauty.
Thank you Ray its good to know it works. Best Keith

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Messages In This Thread
NaPM April 17 2015 - by milo - 04-17-2015, 02:05 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-17-2015, 03:15 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-18-2015, 12:54 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by Todd - 04-18-2015, 01:02 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by Erthona - 04-18-2015, 01:55 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by bena - 04-18-2015, 06:00 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by Erthona - 04-18-2015, 01:32 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by rayheinrich - 04-18-2015, 02:55 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by cidermaid - 04-18-2015, 08:45 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by milo - 04-19-2015, 12:47 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by cidermaid - 04-19-2015, 12:56 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-19-2015, 01:42 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by bena - 04-19-2015, 04:45 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by milo - 04-19-2015, 05:26 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by bena - 04-19-2015, 07:50 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by rayheinrich - 04-19-2015, 02:11 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by jasmine.m.wardiya - 04-19-2015, 04:08 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by Keith - 12-04-2015, 07:18 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by rayheinrich - 12-04-2015, 02:30 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2015 - by Keith - 12-05-2015, 12:52 AM



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