12-04-2015, 02:21 PM
Cool, loved it.
But this line:
"I have just overheard two men discussing."
For verisimilitude, not that it couldn't have been two of the three,
you should make it three; or, alternately, one man talking to himself.
(The latter, by the way, supports two of my four theories.)
But this line:
"I have just overheard two men discussing."
For verisimilitude, not that it couldn't have been two of the three,
you should make it three; or, alternately, one man talking to himself.
(The latter, by the way, supports two of my four theories.)
all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?