Flight

[QDeathstar]

some quick thoughts

I saw the poem in my head
the first time you couldn’t remember
my name, your tongue wanting
to say something, anything; not sure of the something, anything seems redundant
the sadness of it all floated,
catching on a bridge column,
swirling in an eddy of undertows. pretty heavy imagery

Your arms spread like sparrow wings,
and I thought this is how they might look there is something wrong with this stanza, and I think the biggest problem is this line, it's all jumbled up and filled with connecting words...
flying into eternity.