Political Pastoral

[Erthona]

Hi Paul,

Thanks for your comments. Of course the title's generic, what else could it be ?  


"reading this aloud I want it to be " you have""

I vacillated on that myself. I think rhythmically it works better as is.

Then | come back | when you've | the chance  

if you see what I mean?


Yes, I like "burble" at the end of the line and was going to put it there, but then I feared you would say I was being too obvious 

No doubt "deep" is a bit ad hoc and one could say I was beating a dead political horse, but one would hardly call a figure of the body politic deep...unless of course one is such a member.

Thanks again for your comments, I'm sure I will take some of them on. I'll have to wait for Tom to tell me where to put the two commas

dale