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[billy]

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first off sorry for the shitty news, though that isn't/shouldn't betaken into account for the reader. they should either see it in the poem or not see it.
for me a poem like this [your poem] would improve with brevity it feels like it almost rhymes i'm not sure how to take the double meaning within the poem.

great to see you put something after your feedback

You can stare at me hatefully
Willing for my demise.

I will be sleeping peacefully
No matter your web of lies. these lines are short, try and give an image via simile or metaphor

You can lie in (your?) bed
Seeing movies you've (you have?) yet to see.

(Mean?)While I (am?) will be  wed
To Lily, who is close to me.

Feel free to say goodbye (or bid?) farewell
(However?) I know there is nothing left to tell.


Thanksgiving was pretty great then I got shitty news. It's funny in the sense that if you don't laugh about it you might as well cry. Tch Sucks to suck. Also how do I signature on here?