11-29-2015, 06:29 PM
You can stare at me hatefully
Willing for my demise.
I will be sleeping peacefully
No matter your web of lies.
You can lie in (your?) bed
Seeing movies you've (you have?) yet to see.
(Mean?)While I (am?) will be wed
To Lily, who is close to me.
Feel free to say goodbye (or bid?) farewell
(However?) I know there is nothing left to tell.
Willing for my demise.
I will be sleeping peacefully
No matter your web of lies.
You can lie in (your?) bed
Seeing movies you've (you have?) yet to see.
(Mean?)While I (am?) will be wed
To Lily, who is close to me.
Feel free to say goodbye (or bid?) farewell
(However?) I know there is nothing left to tell.
(11-29-2015, 07:15 PM)Badatpoetry101 Wrote: Oh the things in parentheses are what I am considering adding in place ofthe word next to it or have considered adding. I do not know I put them their as a place holder.Thanksgiving was pretty great then I got shitty news. It's funny in the sense that if you don't laugh about it you might as well cry. Tch Sucks to suck. Also how do I signature on here?