False Bloom
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Metaphor is in the mind of the beholder.
That they inspire a reader to expand them into her/his world is hit and miss.

It depends on how they were feeling when they read it, what had happen to them the
very day they read it, how creative a reader they are, what they daydream, what
they wish or hope, how the narrative of their life has unfolded -- their flower?

I realize I can't begin to predict what thoughts, emotions a poem will arouse in others;
but I do think, by now, that I can recognize a poem that will do it well.

This is a poem fully capable of these powers; it functions on a grand scale.

Does a writer have to consciously create on this scale? No, they're subconscious
(what some call a muse) writes the poem and has access to a world their conscious
mind is oblivious to.

Farmers force -- aren't we all farmers?,  does our society work against nature?,  do we
loose our virginity?, did someone harm you?, was it rape?, or did you break yourself?

And from such simple words...
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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False Bloom - by Moonstruck1 - 11-18-2015, 07:59 AM
RE: False Bloom - by dukealien - 11-18-2015, 11:20 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-19-2015, 11:09 AM
RE: False Bloom - by Moonstruck1 - 11-21-2015, 08:52 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-22-2015, 02:41 AM
RE: False Bloom - by Jezie - 11-22-2015, 03:13 PM
RE: False Bloom - by Plato - 11-23-2015, 10:02 AM
RE: False Bloom - by billy - 11-23-2015, 11:18 AM
RE: False Bloom - by Moonstruck1 - 11-23-2015, 12:39 PM
RE: False Bloom - by billy - 11-23-2015, 04:49 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-23-2015, 01:37 PM
RE: False Bloom - by Merfyn Dafydd - 11-26-2015, 12:30 AM
RE: False Bloom - by RiverNotch - 11-27-2015, 03:17 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-27-2015, 03:59 PM
RE: False Bloom - by RiverNotch - 11-27-2015, 04:04 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-27-2015, 06:08 PM



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