Vulnerable

[Wjames]

Hi, WJ, for me the veal and bloody steak don't jive, maybe T-bone or something else.

I like the addition of  S2, it adds to the atmosphere of the place, many first dates. I might break on "checked".

S5 also worked for me, nice edit.

I don't eat much steak (I'm vegetarian, but even before that I didn't really like steak), so I don't know what I'm talking about there; I'll make the change.

I'll think about the "checked" break as well.

Thanks for your thoughts Ella.